I've been writing some short versed poetry lately. Expect a few of the like before I get back to short stories. Anyway, I hope this makes sense to you.
The day took a turn for the worse;
you remember.
Beyond your expectant glances
and their glaze,
I saw clouds thickening.
Obnubilated intentions and ideas,
served only to proliferate our ingenuous disingenuousness.
Then the rain came.
A storm of subterfuge,
befell an otherwise convincing ruse.
When the cataracts lessened,
a tepid glow returned.
The resulting humidity left an indelible musk.
Fallen limbs were cleared and candles lit,
just in time for the guests to arrive.
That last stanza is awesome.
ReplyDelete